
CHAPTER 1
Location: Terraneau
The spy ship sneaked out of the anomaly the way mice sneak out of their holes—quickly, carefully, silently. Anomaly are like electrical tears in the fabric of space. They occur when ships travel using broadcast technology. In this case, the Unified Authority spy ship had a built-in broadcast engine the enabled it to make the hundred-thousand-light year jump from Earth to Terraneau instantaneously. She arrived in Scutum-Crux space approximately fourteen million miles from Terraneau, far enough out of casual surveillance range that we would not have noticed the disturbance had we not been waiting for it. With her stealth generator, the spy ship was invisible to our equipment. Only the anomaly showed on the readouts.
The spy ship was small and unarmed, the naval equivalent of a humming bird. She had the ability to slip in behind enemy lines and listen to our communications, track our movements, and watch our production without threat of detection.
But this ship had been detected. We saw where she broadcasted into our space and we knew her final destination. It didn’t matter that we lost track of the ship as she travelled fourteen million miles from the anomaly to the satellite because we knew precisely where she would end her journey.
She was the mouse in the night, we were the cat. When she materialized beside the satellite, we would pounce. Even if we never saw the ship, our equipment would detect a momentary energy fluctuation when she lowered her shields to retrieve the satellite. She would be vulnerable when she lowered her shields.
I had no sympathy for the crew of the spy ship, they had come to the Scutum-Crux Arm to watch people die. Instead of offering assistance, the bastards placed a satellite so that scientists could study the death of an entire planet.
The satellite was smaller than a golf ball and armed with a camera so powerful that could pick out a single grain of sand in an open desert. The satellite’s unblinking eye undoubtedly recorded us as we pulled our shuttle out of the tunnel and launched into space. It must have spotted us setting our trap as well; but the crew of the spy ship would have no access to that data until they retrieved the satellite.
“Anything?” I asked Cutter. Under normal circumstances, I would have used ship-to-ship communications; but the spy ship might have overheard us. Instead, we used the short-range interLink, a network designed for battlefield communications.
Cutter spoke to a tech officer, then said, “Nothing yet, sir.”
We kept our communications short in case the Unifieds tried to listen in.
Freeman and I watched the scene on a small video screen as we waited inside the kettle of a transport. The screen showed a panoramic view of open space. Terraneau spun in a corner of the screen, its oceans still blue but hidden behind a global cloud of smoke and ash. The alien attack had erased the green from the continents. Gone, too, were the ice caps that once marked the poles at the top and bottom of the planet. Soot from the attack had turned the atmosphere a rusty gray.
“You’re still on our side, right?” I asked.
Ray Freeman, one of the deadliest man who ever lived, said nothing as he watched the screen. The man was huge, seven feet tall. He was wide and thick and covered with muscle. He was also the last of his kind. In a galaxy that had outlawed ethnicities a century ago, Ray Freeman was proudly African-American. A lot of men saw him as someone to fear. I admired him.
Freeman was a human sphinx. He answered questions only when felt like answering. Generally he ignored them. He was a mercenary, but money did not determine his loyalty.
“Why help us?” I asked. “Why not the Unifieds?”
“I’m not taking sides,” said Freeman.
“The hell you’re not,” I said. “We’re about to attack a Unified Authority boat. If you don’t care who wins, you don’t belong on this ride.”
I trusted Freeman, though he had been vague about his loyalties. In my experience, Freeman was not the type who starts the mission as your friend and then shoots you in the back. He made his alliances public and sniped his targets from a mile away. In my experience, Freeman’s loyalty was never in question.
“I don’t care about sides, just saving lives,” Freeman said. “That’s it. It’s not about loyalty. The only planet the Unifieds care about is Earth, you’re out to save what’s left of the galaxy.”
‘What was left of the galaxy…’ Before the first alien invasion, the Unified Authority had one hundred eighty colonized planets scattered around the Milky Way. The aliens “sleeved” one hundred seventy-eight of them. The Enlisted Man’s Empire, a nation composed of the cloned military that the Unified Authority had ejected, re-established contact with twenty-three of those planets before the aliens began incinerating rescued planets.
Freeman’s entire family had been on the first planet the Avatari, the aliens, had incinerated. Having lost everyone he may ever have loved, the galaxy’s best professional killer became a self-appointed savior.
When dealing with people like Ray Freeman, as if there were anyone else like Freeman, there is no room for ambiguity. I decided to reconfirm his motivation. “As long as we’re saving more lives than the Unifieds, you’re on our side?”
He nodded.
“Good enough for me,” I said, though inwardly I still had doubts. The clones of the Enlisted Man’s Empire had been bred to save the lives of natural-borns, and the Unified Authority had thanked us it with one betrayal after another. I felt a need to save the natural-born residents of our planets, but I could not come up with any logical reason to do it.
Satisfied that I could trust Freeman for now, I turned my attention to the mission at hand. “Cutter, are the traps in position?” I asked over the commandLink.
Asking that question was my form of fidgeting. Captain Don Cutter was a good officer, not the kind of man who leaves things undone. Still, we were dealing with an invisible foe and we would only get one shot at the bastards. It was one of those pivotal moments on which the future hangs. If we failed to bag that spy ship, the war would end before it began.
“Yes, sir,” said Cutter. He spoke in a whisper.
Five transports floated within a few a hundred yards of the satellite. They were not debris from the graveyard of ships, Cutter had placed those birds himself. One of the transports carried a team of engineers. Freeman and I sat in the kettle of the second. The others sat facing away from the satellite, their rear hatches open, their kettles carefully packed with explosives. When the spy ship lowered her shields, we would use these transports like old fashioned cannons.
The bombs were not especially powerful. We need to cripple the spy ship, not decapitate her. I didn’t care if the crew lived or died, I didn’t owe the bastards. The ship’s computers, on the other hand, they mattered.
Five million people had just died on Terraneau and millions more had their necks on the chopping block on other planets. The key to saving those was on those computers. We could not win the war with the aliens; but armed with the right information, we might survive it.
“How long has it been since you detected the anomaly?” I asked Cutter.
“Fifty-two minutes, sir,” he said.
Fifty-two minutes, I thought. Fifty-two minutes to travel fourteen million miles, either the bastards are taking their time or they figured us out. In conventional travel, U.A. cruisers topped out at speed of thirty-eight million miles per hour. Travelling the fourteen million miles from the anomaly should have taken less than half an hour.
“Maybe they know we’re here.” I said the words out loud but meant them for myself.
“Not likely,” said Cutter.
Listening over the interLink, Freeman heard every word we said but did not comment. He lived in a world of absolutes. Either the spy ship was coming or she was not. He saw no value in second guessing the situation.
I looked back at the video screen and saw nothing but empty space. The satellite was so small that it did not even appear on my screen. A little bubble of light represented the area around it.
“Mars, are your men ready?” I asked on a different frequency. Mars, Lieutenant Scott Mars, ran my corps of Navy engineers. I would have preferred using a demolitions team on this mission, but Mars’s men were handy with explosives.
“Yes, sir. You stop the ship, sir, and we’ll kick her doors in,” he said.
“Minimal damage,” I reminded him for what might have been the hundredth time.
“You said you wanted a hole,” he reminded me.
“Right,” I said.
“If you know a way to put a hole in a ship without doing damage…”
“I take your point.”
“We’ll keep the damage to a minimum, sir,” said Mars.
Cutter interrupted us. “It’s a go!”
Nothing had changed on my screen. The ash-choked atmosphere of of Terraneau still showed in one corner of the screen. Our transports still hid at the edge of the debris.
I did not see the spy ship. Of course I didn’t see her, not yet at least. But the spy ship must have been in place beside the satellite and her crew must have lowered her shields or Cutter would not have sent that message. His sensors detected energy fluctuations.
Cutter detonated the bombs in the three open transports, firing a barrage of bearings and shrapnel at the invisible target. In the silence of space, the detonation made no noise; but the explosions flashed and vanished on my video screen.
Had it been a civilian ship caught in that storm, the debris would have broken it to pieces. The spy ship took the beating, and survived. Her stealth generators failed and she came into view. Air and flames leaked from small holes in her hull and a large outer panel had been ripped from her bow, all cosmetic damage that would prove fatal for her crew.
The ship was shaped like the head of a gigantic spear, fifty feet wide at her stern and two hundred feet long. Tiny electrical eruptions burst across her cylindrical hull. This bird would need repairs before she flew again. No problem. Mars's engineers could repair her.
Our ambush nearly sheered off one of her three aft engines. It hung limp at an odd angle like an arm in a cast. Liquid fuel escaped from the back of the engine, flying into space in bubbles. If the pilot of the spy ship tried to light the other engines, he’d ignite a fire that would consume the entire ship; but judging by the damage to the bridge, I did not worry about survivors among the flight crew. The bridge had gone dark and the spy ship wasn’t going anywhere.
73 comments:
36 days and counting...
Can't wait! The only good part about summer ending is new Harris book right around the corner.
That was great, cannot wait for the book.
I think I'm going to have to take the morning off so I can swing by B&N as soon as they open up.
Thanks, guys... and JenMo
I already bought it and will download to my kindle at 1201
sweet!
Steven
Great start, have you ever thought of doing some artist depictions of your ships, I am dying to see a drawing of the big carriers ?
I have a couple of sketches of Freeman done by a young man named Steve Leitch. Other than that, and, of course the wonderful covers from Christian McGrath, nothing has ever been sketched to my knowledge.
If I were more of an artist, I'd give it a shot (as I have mental pictures of them all in my head). But I'm not that much of an artist, so I don't think I'd do them justice at all.
Welcome to my world.
How do you deal with sci-fi geeks that question your use of measurements and what not in your books? I admit, I'm one of them and am highly critical, but try really hard to keep it to myself and apply it to what I write.
I have a first draft done and currently being brutalized by an english professor who is much smarter than me. how do you approach your second drafts? I find myself way to anxious to get going and I am excited to learn about mistakes I have made. is that sick?
I don't deal with them. I realize they are generally right, especially when it comes to scientific information. I am a story teller and the furthest thing from a scientist.
It always amazes me when some critic points out how scientifically inadequate my novels are. I just remind myself that my books are at least twice as scientifically based as the original Star Wars novels.
Johnny, that is the precise RIGHT attitude to bring. Love your first drafts for they are, the Swiss cheese blueprints of what you want your final novel to be. You did not truly know your characters or your world when your first started writing, now you do. You did not know where your story was going. You through stuff into your proverbial shopping bag that you didn't really want to purchase and missed items on your shopping list that you really needed to have.
I can't wait for your new novel. The only problem will be getting to read it before my son steals it from me.
Music to my ears!
I actually really appreciate that your books don't read like tech manuals. After I finish one, I feel like I've been on a helluva adventure. Unlike some others, when I get finished and feel like I can rebuild a dylithium chamber and never really connected to the story. I feel like all the science and tech should be background, and some authors practically make the stuff characters.
Oh and Jeanie the solution to your dilemma: buy two copies!
I didn't read this as I need no other reason to get The Clone Redemption other than the fact that it is another "chapter" in the Clone series. I am a fan for life!
Thank you, so much.
I will be dying for 24 days because of you Steve. Thanks a lot -_-
Oh and also, you ended the last book with the Asian SEALS about to invade the alien planet. What happend to that?
Did I? Ooops, um, er ah...
Just kidding. A few months back I posted the introduction to The Clone Redemption. The introduction is about the SEALs and the Japanese Fleet. I think you will find they play a pivotal role in this book.
Hi all,
Long time no see - my bad. I've been pretty busy, what with college annnnd MARINE Rotc (hell yea; kind of like in the book!). Anywho, I am damn excited about this next book. I really hope that I don't die :D. These books are pretty fast paced as well - hard to believe that there were just mogats and the UA beforehand. Are there any large naval operations in this book?
Where to you go to college and what are you studying?
Naval operations? Oh, Hell yes!
I am going to USC, and am studying psychology though I plan to switch to business; time is not on my side as it used to be tbh.
Those navy guys have it so much easier than us during PT >_>
Naval operations? Might this perhaps harken back to the awesome naval combat of Rogue Clone? I can only hope :P
Sniperae, there are a couple of Sad Sammers I visited a year ago while in Hawaii who transferred to the Marines from the Army. You would need to be pretty dedicated to make a jump like that.
I hope you guys will like the naval sequences.
WOW just WOW i have to say when i read it i was like where is the rest of it, but dam i can not wait until the book comes out and the part about freeman being a savior when you see what his job is and how many people he has killed just amazing. all i can say now is looking forward to the other books.
I really hope you like the book when you finally see it, Amer. I always worry.
Mr. Kent after 6 books their is no longer any reason to worry you got some serious fans that like the books you have made so far and all i can say is thank you for introducing us to a well made series with a interesting plot and likable characters even the ones you really hate except SAM the jailer from book two i think thats his name he was a real ass but he was ok in a weird kind of way
I think the worst bad guy in these books was Doctorow, even though I meant for him to be mostly likable in the first book.
ya he was i liked him at first but when his planet got saved he did a complete personality change i guess power does corrupt oh and let me just say something her you have to stop killing all of wayson's friends i mean the only one he has left is freeman and we dont really know what he is thinking most of the time so if mars is still alive keep him or if he makes new ones keep them and also keep the adam clones, other than that you can kill of anyone you want but seeing as how the aliens are killing everyone on the planet i guess you are already doing that
There is the much dislike Ava Gardner.
My favorite character was Mynx... Just kidding.
The other day I was looking at the covers of the books so far and thought it would be great to have a few posters printed.
Mynx! I haven't even thought of Mynx in years.
lol my first thought it who is mynx going to have to reread the series and another thing is it me or does harris always look different in each book not counting the first one cause you cant really see his face that much
Started reading the series again (for the fourth or fifth time), about to finish the first book. That's why I thought of Mynx, besides liking cats anyway. It's very sad to read about the friendship with Lee, knowing how it'll end.
Same model on every cover. I asked Christian McGrath that very question.
I had not planned the Harris-Lee falling out in advance. That did not occur to me until just about the time I started writing it. I think I got the idea from watching the movie Ben Hur.
I wish you hadn't watched Ben Hur. ;-) Hopefully there'll be a solid friendship to last in Harris' future. To balance the amount of unlikable characters.
lol i found out who mynx was just before i went to sleep the cat from the vacation house in Hawaii i really wanted to know who it was and didn't want to look in the book until i couldn't find out who it was.
He's got his pilot, Ava, and Freeman. One other old friend does emerge in this book... a positive relationship.
Yup, Mynx the cat that thinks he's a tiger.
yup the fish stealer and i am amazed that Ava is still alive and is with Harris and for the pilot is it the same one that he beat up because i liked him and an old friend hmm i kinda want shannon to come back but i dont think that could happen can you tell me the book the old friend is seen in that might help me know who it is and if you cant i can wait for a week or so until i read it
And just how much does this friend drink?
Water or booze?
Not Shannon, that is certain. He was in Betrayal... and only for a moment, but a fun moment.
betrayal huh well thomer is out seeing s how he had a death reflex, not herrington ether his transpot went down and not mooreland he is underground maybe dead too so that leaves hollingsworth but he was promoted in the last book and might have been on the Kamehameha when the unifeds attacked so he might be dead too. so after consulting my book i can see that the only one that was funny for a small moment was doctor feeney when Harris was in the hospital or ensign kwai at the start of the book but i cant see how he would fit in so other than that im going to wait for the book
What about the clone hunter ritz
What about him?
You guys are putting way too much leg work into this. Just wait and see.
Two weeks to go and all your questions will be answered. Hope you like how they come out.
a week left and i get to read the new book cant wait, but i read betrayal again whenyou said that their was a character their i think it might be o doul idk maybe but after reading it i was thinking about something that wasnt explained clearly. in betrayal it said that all the clones are being transferred to the scutum crux fleet, but in book 6 their are clones all over 6 arms so were the clones also transferred to other arms or when the fleet escaped at the end of book 5 they went to the other galaxies
Amer,
Keep an eye on your bookseller. I bet the books are on store shelves before the weekend.
"Keep an eye on your bookseller. I bet the books are on store shelves before the weekend."
Do booksellers really do that? There are few series I actually follow, yours being the first. I always thought stores were not supposed to put out books before the official release date.
Is that just something they do for the major titles like HP? If so I might have to go grease some palms.
They can do it with authors like me because no one complains. Your Stephen Kings and JK Rowlings, on the other hand, are carefully monitored.
I'll just say, I am kind of tired to only have Harris be a recognizable character in the book - too many people from the olden days are dead or gone (Vince lee, my favorite of the harris gang, klyber, shannon, phillips, thomer, illych since hes in another galaxy, etc). Why not throw in some of the old natural born seals? shouldnt there be some left? or some liberators that the ua made to fight harris?
and just out of curiosity, why doesnt harris ever have a regulation haircut in the book covers?
I have little to do with the covers, though I really do like them.
What about Freeman. He's still around. Illych is ABSOLUTELY in this book.
I just picked up The Clone Redemption at a store today. I was really surprised to see it on the shelf since it isn't supposed to come out until next week. The book has a fair heft for a paperback.
I am on the fence between devouring the book right now as a fan that made a 200+ mile round trip to buy up a previous Clone book (turned out none of the local stores were stocking it) or being good and having a one-man midnight release on the appropriate date.
Nick, get reading! I'm dying to hear what you guys think. Just know that I won't post any spoilers for two weeks--then I will run another "Spoiler Town."
I just checked with my local B&N. It has not arrived yet.
I too picked up a copy today. I actually checked all 3 local B&N and none of them even had the book in stock let alone on the shelf. Oh a whim I stopped by Books-A-Million when I went to BestBuy and lo and behold they had The Clone Redemption (surprisingly no other Clone books).
I don't think I've ever been to a Books a Million. Cool name, though.
Books A Million is where I picked up my copy as well. Other than the B&N College store at my campus where I work come the transistion between semesters there isn't a B&N in my county.
I am about half way through Redemption after rereading the last 20 Chapters of Empire to refresh my memory. Out of a deep-seated disdain for unasked for spoilers I won't give any until the spoiler post is made in a few weeks.
So far the action is intense, the tactics are brilliant, the dillemas are depressingly vivid, and the humor is AMAZING! I absolutely love the byplay between Harmer and Warren, Holman's notepad just cracks me up.
The concept of the Gaurd is a very nice touch.
All in all if the book had cost twice as much it would still be a bargain and I still have half the book to go!
Thank you for the great send off, Nick. Thank you very much. BTW, if there are no B&Ns around you, where do you life?
I live in Anniston, Calhoun County, Alabama. It is basically midway between Atlanta and Birmingham.
Nearest proper Barnes and Nobles are up in Gadsden and way out in Birmingham. But I grew up going to Books-A-Million unfortunately they have a seriously inconsistent book set up.
If a book isn't in Alphabetical order on the Genre shelves it might be on the best of the Genre shelf, out front, in one of of the set up on the outside aisles, or misplaced in the Young Adult section depending upon whom they think the book should appeal.
You folks have it made. Here in Germany (at least in my town) I'd never find such books in a bookstore, and if so they'd be overpriced (around 10€). Fortunately there's Amazon. Reading all the previous books right now, so the background will be fresh in mind next week.
Amazon has indeed improved the world, though I suspect my friends at Borders would disagree.
I must say Mr. Kent, you are quite the saboteur. I've had the absolute hardest time putting this book down and I'm giving a talk at a conference on Saturday. Telling me that I could find the book before the release date was an act of pure evil! Despite that, many thanks.
@Maurice I know your pain. I once had an order from Germany take two months to clear customs.
er... um.... my sincerest apologies?
Amer Wrote
went and got the book after school was over at first i couldn't find it than i asked the lady at the help desk and she said that they just got the shipment and would get it for me since than i have been reading it and let me say i am enjoying it and the S.I.P's wow i just hope *********** cause that would be sad
I made one small edit Amer because that was one cat I am not yet ready to let out of the bag.
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